Directions: Below you will see an example of thesis statements. You are to analyze each and determine if they meet all of the requirements to be an appropriate thesis statement, or if corrections should be made. Note your answers in the area under each statement. If you feel corrections to the thesis statement should be made, list the needed changes as well.
"The Civil War remains vastly different than any other conflict ever seen by the United States. The widespread impact of war on citizens, the economy and the landscape of America proves that the importance of the Civil War is unique when compared to other major conflicts of the past 200 years"
